Johnnyxonfire's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sword Fighter Extreme]

Cooking something

Well, to start, the title should not be called "Sword Fighter Extreme", it totally misleads people. Next time you upload something as a test for feedback, you should label it with the word test or something to indicate that it is not complete.

Like I saw other people say, the background is boring, it could have used at least a temporary background that looked like a scene. When you do finally complete the whole flash, it would help to have some background animations unlike most of the flashes of this nature.

It is a little choppy, if you search on google, you can find some methods on how to make animations less choppy.

Good luck!

[illwillpenis XV]

Floating penis...

Dude, nice background with the rain, the sand, and what not. I do not however see any point in the penis floating above the guy's head. Must be some kind of inside joke or something.

illwillpenis responds:

No inside joke. Just penis.

[Cyberen Commits Suicide]

Not sure what the point was

Dude, I don't get it; I'm not sure that's the type of thing that belongs on newgrounds. I don't think you can really count this as a movie either. It's just music playing over an image.

[Aladdin 3150]

Awesome!

You seem to have put a lot of time and effort into your cartoon. When I saw "Aladdin 3150", I was reluctant to even watch it, but I'm glad I did. You pulled off an amazing feat.

The drawing style was unique and quite excellent. The concepts were truely creative. The overall submission is very awful and inspiring. Great job!

P.S. if you have a very very up to date system (not including Vista *pukes on ground*) you don't really experience any lag that I had noticed.

[how many licks]

Annoying!

Dude, ok... I had to turn my sound up real loud to hear the voices, and then all of a sudden the colored screen comes up with this deafening roar of a ring. NOT COOL! Animation was interesting, but dude, make the ringing stop next time!

[Cuboy Ep.1]

Flippin Sweet!

Dude, I haven't seen something that funny in a long time. I don't know what kind of magical llama you rubbed to come up with that, but show us some more!

[Space Jock Jam]

It's decent

You did a decent job. I'm gonna guess your just begging this flash stuff, because you chose something that wasn't your own, and there was a lot to be left desired. I didn't find it too funny. I saw where you intended to put in the laughs, but you just didn't happen to execute it the right way. From lots of time practicing with Flash and watching other peoples videos, I've learned this, and I wanna share it with you. It seems like a lot more work, because it is, but the end result is 10 times better. Instead of animating all of the seperate parts of a character (most of the times), it's a lot better if you draw several instances of the character, particularly for the dancing elmar fudd. there is too much action going on in a dance for you to be able to accuratly animate it all with flash at this level. If you draw just the right amount of instance of elmar fudd, and pace them right in the time line, it'll look like he's dancing a lot better. Even though it's missing the analog motion, the human eye won't really know the difference in that short amount of time. Keep working at it, and you'll make it as far as you wanna go.